All of the feedback that I got was very positive and they all supported my idea. The only suggestion I received was to implement a mentorship program, which I thought was a great idea. The rest of the feedback was general positive statements.
3) What did you change, based on the feedback?
I made sure to mention a mentorship program which I will include as part of Career Quest. I think its something I did not think of at first but I now realize its a great idea and a great tool for young students.
I like your video. Very well dressed and right to the point with a hook in the beginning. I like how you fixed and tweaked just a few things from your last video. I think this could go a long way! I think a mentorship program would be a great idea as well I am glad you added it.
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ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed hearing about your idea and how passionate you are about your mentor-ship program and their education to be successful in their careers. I think you could have spoken a little louder and more enthusiastic about your subject, but I also don't want you to lose the direct nature of the pitch. I think you did a great job being clear, without a lot of fluff, and to the point. Here is a link to my elevator speech if you are interested: http://theentrepreneurperspective.blogspot.com.es/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html Good Luck with your idea! I think it really could help future generations get careers.
Hi Juan, great job with your video! You dressed the part and had a great beginning that really got me interested in your concept. I think you have a great idea here and I really liked the addition of a mentor ship program. I think the program will make you stand out from some of the other online tests you can take that try to tell you what career you fit best in. If you'd like to look at my pitch, here's the link: http://nicmcq.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
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ReplyDeleteOverall I think you did a great job with your video. You analyzed the consumer's comments and changed your pitch accordingly. Also, I like that you dressed up in professional business attire. I also believe that your idea is a great one and you could be on to something. Keep up the great work! If you want to check out my blog, its on a fitness app I call 'FitStop'
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Hey Juan, I like your idea to help future kids find the proper career for them. As for your pitch you did an excellent job being well dressed, however I felt as if you don't really show too much passion for your idea. I don't mean to offend you, but it's just my opinion.
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